I have walked the distance,
diminishing every line.
Who has seen the wind?
Neither I nor you.
But the splotch absconds
from the weary wind.
Absolved absence howls
Who has seen the wind?
Neither I nor you
Distance counts nothingness,
but distance fleeing you apart
Neither I nor you.
Inspired from Christina Rosetti's Who has seen the wind?
Very nice take on the prompt. Well-woven words...coherent...lovely feelings infused here.
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Sayantini Bhattacharya
another part of me
nicely done, the repetition works well
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