Tuesday 15 October 2013

Clouds



Lucent, light, lofty
lighter than my every step,
I was walking on

~

My eyes open to
the silvered sky, grey clouds
and romancing gloom

~

He held her hand, soft
His eyes closed, a sigh, cloud
he held and thought of


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4 comments:

  1. Magical Mystical Teacher15 October 2013 at 18:17

    "romancing gloom"

    Sounds ominous!

    Plum Clouds

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  2. Reading Pleasure15 October 2013 at 20:07

    Interesting Haiku. I particularly like the first one!

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  3. Anonymous15 October 2013 at 22:24

    "romancing gloom" This is my favorite haiku line of the day! Very apt.

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  4. Locomente16 October 2013 at 12:51

    I enjoyed this!

    You may read my haiku at:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/10/i-walk.html

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