I walk slow by thee,
in the night's tranquility,
weary tree-lined street.
~
Parched, Befallen leaves
frolics to tune,sways down
of the whirling wind.
~
Falling gleams of Sun,
over the bare brown branches
sparks the breeze around.
Image source: Google
Written for: Haiku Heights
Each one gives a lovely taste of autumn.. thanks..
ReplyDeleteI am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-sheds-inhibitions.html
These are all lovely, but my favorite is #3. Beautiful images.
ReplyDeleteLovely set my favorite is the last!
ReplyDeleteThe first haiku is the best for me here - lyrical and evocative.
ReplyDeleteThe first haiku is the best for me - lyrical and evocative.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku specially the last one ~
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set, I'd say! :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice set of haiku. My favourite is the first with "in the nights tranquility"
ReplyDeleteThe first one made me feel most there.
ReplyDeleteLovely! "walk slow by thee" reminds me of a vesper hymn. "sparks the breeze" nice nice line.
ReplyDeleteI loved the 2nd one...
ReplyDeleteVery nice...
wow...
ReplyDeleteliked the first 3 lines the most..
very nice really liking the 1st one as well
ReplyDeleteMy favourite is number 3. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe last one tastes the best of autumn :) Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYou haiku capture a feeling of autumn well. My favorite is the second. Frolicking is always good.
ReplyDeleteamazing paper just beautiful...
ReplyDeletehttp://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-haiku.html
very serene and quite lovely
ReplyDeleteVery creative!
ReplyDeleteI see autumn through your eyes!
ReplyDeleteMy Lady Autumn