Tuesday 4 September 2012

Autumn





I walk slow by thee,
in the night's tranquility,
weary tree-lined street.

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Parched, Befallen leaves
frolics to tune,sways down
of the whirling wind.

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Falling gleams of Sun,
over the bare brown branches
sparks the breeze around.


Image source: Google
Written for: Haiku Heights

20 comments:

  1. Each one gives a lovely taste of autumn.. thanks..

    I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-sheds-inhibitions.html

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  2. These are all lovely, but my favorite is #3. Beautiful images.

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  3. Lovely set my favorite is the last!

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  4. The first haiku is the best for me here - lyrical and evocative.

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  5. The first haiku is the best for me - lyrical and evocative.

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  6. Lovely haiku specially the last one ~

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  7. Very nice set of haiku. My favourite is the first with "in the nights tranquility"

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  8. The first one made me feel most there.

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  9. Lovely! "walk slow by thee" reminds me of a vesper hymn. "sparks the breeze" nice nice line.

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  10. I loved the 2nd one...
    Very nice...

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  11. wow...
    liked the first 3 lines the most..

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  12. very nice really liking the 1st one as well

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  13. My favourite is number 3. Well done.

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  14. The last one tastes the best of autumn :) Beautiful.

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  15. You haiku capture a feeling of autumn well. My favorite is the second. Frolicking is always good.

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  16. amazing paper just beautiful...

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-haiku.html

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  17. very serene and quite lovely

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