Out of the stark blue,
one winter evening
bleak loneliness.
~
Between the light strokes,
of black and white, I see gray
of loneliness.
~
Tottered and tripped, once
impaired and shattered but twice
hovers solitude.
Written for Haiku Heights.
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hovering solitude! wow lovely haiku!
ReplyDeletebeautiful chain.
ReplyDeleteYou have colored loneliness in stark terms!
ReplyDeleteLoneliness of Stars
Like your haiku and the image you've chosen.
ReplyDeleteLike the blue and grey colors of loneliness ~ Well done ~
ReplyDeletereally liking the use of color for mood and nature
ReplyDeleteI do like the middle one here best. Black and white do feel easier and less lonely than gray, somehow.
ReplyDeleteHow can you write many at one theme? Impressed!
ReplyDeleteI love the last one a lot!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
I like these haunting haiku , especially the last one.
ReplyDeletetwice hovers solitude!! well done
ReplyDeleteYou painted loneliness is one of its loneliest forms. Well done.
ReplyDeleteP.S. I'm also currently reading Emma.
lovely set :)
ReplyDeleteDescribed different shades of loneliness....Well done :)
ReplyDeleteLonely girl
Solitude can be strength at times: a strong independence - and here you have touched on the weakness/despair of solitude. Excellent use of the sparseness of the Haiku form to capture the empty yearning of loneliness
ReplyDeleteTwo lovely yet different descriptions of lonliness. Well done. Thanks a mil for coming by.
ReplyDeleteLovely, I had to think about the last one a lot. Fantastic
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