Thursday 20 September 2012

Lights



I am by your side,
with my head on your shoulder
gazing sun's flickers

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In the midst of road,
I stand by the moving world
with distorted lights.

~

I'm looking back,my
fingers running through your hair
yours, my world alights.


Written for Haiku Heights
Image source: Google.

11 comments:

  1. These are very nice. My favourite is the second "I stand by the moving world".

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  2. Looking back tends to do that sometimes.. this is all a little bittersweet.. A wonderful haiku! Congrats!

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  3. A romantic take! Fondness very much felt! Nicely!

    Hank

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  4. A wonderful evocative take on the prompt.

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  5. Beautiful Haiku. So delicate.

    Also can you tell me how to get the button code for goodreads?
    Much thanks.

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  6. romantic and dreamy.

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  7. love it.

    glad to discover your talent, welcome join us today.

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