Saturday, 15 September 2012

Creation


If only I'd look,
I've made you, perception!
looking back at me.

~

The upper fold glides,
and the lower fold: flits wide.
gives life to delight.


Written for Haiku Heights

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9 comments:

  1. PattiKen15 September 2012 at 02:25

    SOunds like origami. I can picture it. Nice.

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  2. Barbara15 September 2012 at 02:45

    Lovely set! I like the images you created in the second one!

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  3. Ellecee15 September 2012 at 04:38

    Very unique haiku. I enjoyed them very much.

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  4. Chèvrefeuille15 September 2012 at 06:18

    Very nice. Could be origami indeed. I learned about haiku through a origami artist.

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  5. Anonymous15 September 2012 at 14:45

    These made me think, without seeming either forced or obvious - lovely haiku

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  6. Sri Valli15 September 2012 at 21:45

    Different take!..Liked reading it...:)


    Ripple of thoughts

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  7. Barbara15 September 2012 at 22:34

    Delightful!!

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  8. Ramesh Sood15 September 2012 at 23:11

    You expressed it well... well RS:)

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  9. Someone is Special28 September 2012 at 10:14

    Unique take on the prompt!

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