Friday 14 September 2012

Revelation



Distorted Voices,
speaks to my unruly mind,
unveils my silence.

~

Through the alternate,
Rectangle black and white keys,
breaking the silence.

~


Little slivery,
splinters of truth, you tell me,
unfounds truth within.

Written for Haiku Heights
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6 comments:

  1. Ellecee14 September 2012 at 05:26

    I enjoyed your haiku today. My favourite is the last one. "unfounds truth within"

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  2. PattiKen14 September 2012 at 06:37

    Nice set. I love the "little silvery splinters of truth." That's a great phrase.

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  3. Reading Pleasure14 September 2012 at 17:31

    lovely set of Haiku; great metaphor.

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  4. joanne14 September 2012 at 21:46

    now the silence is broken, revel in the truth....well written haiku

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  5. Vinay Leo R.15 September 2012 at 10:16

    I like the way you put across the piano.. Very beautiful :)

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  6. Magical Mystical Teacher16 September 2012 at 04:32

    An unveiling is what most of us need!

    Revelation

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