Sunday 2 September 2012

Color



Flickering yellow,
barely merged with the blue
That's just me and you.

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You smelt of warm spring,
on gray december morning.
A color in drab.

~

You walk still by me
like colors race down, rainbow
imperceptibly.


Image source: Google
Written for: Haiku Heights


11 comments:

  1. Love the set, the first is my favorite.

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  2. I like the colors..specially the first and second one ~

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  3. "you walk still by me' love this image. It sums your set up for me.

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  4. The colours of a relationship often explore a rainbow of tones!

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  5. Lovely haiku - I like the simplicity and directness of the first one most, and the second has atmosphere.

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  6. These are lovely - so romantic. I like them all - especially the second.

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  7. This haiku is just wonderful. As I was busy writing my haiku for today's prompt Color ... I could see the rainbow in front of my house. Your haiku (and the picture) brought the image back to my mind.
    Thank you.

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  8. Wonderfully crafted
    I was like WOW on each set...its raining here but I already saw a rainbow!

    good luck!

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  9. Lovely, and I'm not sure why, but a little sad.

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  10. A untold colourful story told through colourful words :)

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