A little of blue,
sprinkled, little of yellow
scattered billion stars.
~
Cascading silver,
spurted great fleeting wonders
finding their path,still.
~
Stirred yet motionless,
I stand enclosed,on ground
amidst shooting stars.
Image source: Google
Written for: Haiku Heights.
really liked the stirred but motionless image.
ReplyDeletePicture perfect Haiku..all..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
The last is especially nice. I imagine standing looking up on a cloudless star-filed night.
ReplyDeleteHaiku Perfect! ♥ it..
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I especially like, "finding their path, still". A special haiku.
ReplyDeleteTotally wonderful! (Like mine.)
ReplyDeleteI love the image of the stars being sprinkled and scattered. Very nice set
ReplyDeleteI like the sense of movement and change in the middle one, but the last one works superbly because the last line is such a good ending/fulfilment.
ReplyDeleteI like the middle one for its sense of movement, but the last is superb - especially the last line, which is a perfect ending.
ReplyDeleteWOW! What can I say more ... chapeau!
ReplyDeleteI love all three. Beautifully done
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteWonderful set. Loved the third one most :-)
ReplyDeleteas if a little kid is painting the milky way in her imagination.. sweet stuff..
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The last one.. oh yes, that is the best of the three :)
ReplyDeletereally liking them
ReplyDeleteIsn't it odd that what is stirred looks motionless?
ReplyDeleteMilky Way