Benighted twilight
after a newmoon, rises
a cast crescent moon.
~
Encompassing by,
aphotic as night's darkness
lurks a silver line.
~
Ascending through the
darkness, like hope in distress
illumes crescent moon.
Image source: Google
Written for Haiku Heights
I find all the three giving a different feel..I liked them all...
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Love the way you've written all three haiku, but I love the third one the most ... well done.
ReplyDeletethese are masterful. I love the image you created in the first set
ReplyDeleteSo many more so much intrigue and fun, like your write
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this set of haiku very much, especially the third one. It struck a special chord with me.
ReplyDeleteA new moon is so delicate. I like your tribute to her.
ReplyDeleteNeat !
ReplyDeletePS : i was suddenly reminded of movie Twilight from the image :D
Thanks Nimue,
DeleteInitially that was on my mind,but cliché.
I like "benighted twilight"
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Wonderful set. I like 'benighted twilight' and need to google aphotic.
ReplyDeleteAll the three are finely written. I like the third one the most. Great!
ReplyDelete"illumes crescent moon"
ReplyDeleteI too find magical the first slice after the new moon, as if hope in the darkness.
I like that first one.. the image and imagery are quite different and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI love the beautiful crescent moon you've used for inspiration. You have beautiful imagery in these.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of haiku, well crafted, beautiful imagery. Loved reading this :-)
ReplyDeleteYour haiku are lovely moonbeams of light.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of haiku! The last one was too good!
ReplyDeleteAll so filled with hope... and beauty!
ReplyDeleteThe lurking silver line draws me in!
ReplyDeletePursuing the Moon