Opens wide,shuts close.
a barrier between two worlds,
for here now, and there.
~
Rise and fall,moving.
tied and binded, linked but free,
an abridged distance.
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Written for: September Heights
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Love these!
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Deletevery nice . . . love the term "an abridged distance"
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy =)
DeleteBeautiful set !!!
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DeleteLoved the first one more than the second one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Diwakar =)
Delete"a barrier between two worlds" I like this line. A drawbridge could well be that.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment Ellecee =)
DeleteLovely set of haiku. Love the way you have written these haiku on the prompt drawbridge without using the word itself. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Krist =)
Delete"an abridged distance" well done!
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Delete"linked but free,"
ReplyDeleteI get this, nicely done.
Thanks Susan =)
Delete"tied and binded, linked but free" - beautiful contrast here !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks once again, Green =)
DeleteBeautiful haiku...it shows drawbridge..as well as the picture does..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
'Linked, but free' is beautiful! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteCreepy thorns to glistening petals
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Deletevery nice and I went all silly with mine
ReplyDeleteThanks Bruce.
Deleteindeed barrier between two worlds but also connects them... Good words here
ReplyDeletehttp://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/08/drawbridge-haiku.html
Thanks Tarun.
DeleteLiked both the haiku.. :)
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Thanks Someone.
DeleteI'm glad for the reminder that a drawbridge, especially at a castle, is a barrier and not an open invitation!
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Nice, a perfect metaphor for so many relationships.
ReplyDeleteOne scary place to have such a formidable barrier with a moat around it ... nicely done. Humans set themselves up in the same way. Visiting from September Heights - DrawBridge
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